Albin, work on softening your lines in the value drawings and getting more line variety in the still life. Lighten the back ground objects here and there with your kneaded eraser and try to vary the lines in the foreground objects. The stalks through the glass and water were drawn the same as the stalks above the edge of the vase, where as they would have been lighter and softer through the water if you see what i mean. Good proportions but again try to vary your lines a bit more.
Albin, work on softening your lines in the value drawings and getting more line variety in the still life. Lighten the back ground objects here and there with your kneaded eraser and try to vary the lines in the foreground objects. The stalks through the glass and water were drawn the same as the stalks above the edge of the vase, where as they would have been lighter and softer through the water if you see what i mean. Good proportions but again try to vary your lines a bit more.